Monday, 12 March 2018

Blake B's writing using metaphors

WALT: write a poem using a metaphor to make
my writing descriptive and interesting to
Share with an audience

I am a speeding green lamborghini speeding
through the street

I am the sky tower extremely tall and big

I am a yummy piece of lime flavoured cake

I am a big pencil reaching down to write

I am a pair of shiny green shirt

By BlakeB


  1. Tracey (Blakes Mum)13 March 2018 at 17:52

    Yum perhaps i can come cruising with you too Blake. We could bake a lime flavoured cake together too...yum yum.

  2. Blake your poem is fantastic! Super writing!