Monday, 12 March 2018

Blake B's writing using metaphors

WALT: write a poem using a metaphor to make
my writing descriptive and interesting to
Share with an audience
I am a speeding green lamborghini speeding
through the street
I am the sky tower extremely tall and big
I am a yummy piece of lime flavoured cake
I am a big pencil reaching down to write
I am a pair of shiny green shirt

By BlakeB
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous13 March 2018 at 16:13

    Great use of adjectives Blake

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  2. Tracey (Blakes Mum)13 March 2018 at 17:52

    Yum perhaps i can come cruising with you too Blake. We could bake a lime flavoured cake together too...yum yum.

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  3. Anonymous12 July 2018 at 17:29

    Blake your poem is fantastic! Super writing!

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